Task 1: The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart below illustrates the difference
consuming
at least five fruit and Change preposition
in consuming
vegetables
rations between men and women by age Change the noun form
vegetable
group
in the UK during 2006.
Overall
, all age group
had the number of females higher than males, except Fix the agreement mistake
groups
group
of 75. Add an article
a group
the group
Whereas
group
of (19-24) was the lowest, the opposite was seen in the people who had ages Correct article usage
the group
within
55 to 64.
(55-64), (65-74) and (75) were the groups of elderly, which was the majority. The highest belonged to Change preposition
between
group
of (55-64) with Add an article
a group
the group
total
number of both genders at 68%, the figures of men and ladies in Change the article
a total
the total
this
group
with 35% and 32% respectively, the variation is 3%. Similarly
in the group
of
(65-74) Change preposition
apply
with
30% Change preposition
apply
females
, 3% more than males at 27%. Strikingly, the individuals who were 75 years old shared the same figure of both Add a missing verb
were females
sexs
.
Correct your spelling
sexes
On the other hand
, the groups of adolescent
and Fix the agreement mistake
adolescents
middle age
people within 19 to 24 were the Correct your spelling
middle-aged
group
with less consuming
than others, in which, the Replace the word
consumption
teenage
who Correct your spelling
teenagers
consuming
least just 31%, nearly half of the largest Wrong verb form
consumed at
group
. While
more women in the groups of (19-24), (25-34),(35
-44) accounted Correct word choice
and (35
Change preposition
for the
the
similar number at 2.5%, the Correct article usage
a
group
of (45-54) was male’s
consuming with Unnecessary verb
male
highest
variation at 10%.Correct article usage
the highest
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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