Task 1: The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates the difference
consuming
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at least five fruit and
vegetables
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rations between men and women by age
group
in the UK during 2006.
Overall
, all age
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had the number of females higher than males, except
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of 75.
Whereas
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the group
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of (19-24) was the lowest, the opposite was seen in the people who had ages
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55 to 64. (55-64), (65-74) and (75) were the groups of elderly, which was the majority. The highest belonged to
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of (55-64) with
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number of both genders at 68%, the figures of men and ladies in
this
group
with 35% and 32% respectively, the variation is 3%.
Similarly
in the
group
of
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(65-74)
with
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30%
females
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were females
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, 3% more than males at 27%. Strikingly, the individuals who were 75 years old shared the same figure of both
sexs
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sexes
.
On the other hand
, the groups of
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and
middle age
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middle-aged
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people within 19 to 24 were the
group
with less
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than others, in which, the
teenage
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teenagers
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who
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least just 31%, nearly half of the largest
group
.
While
more women in the groups of (19-24), (25-34),
(35
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and (35
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-44) accounted
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the
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similar number at 2.5%, the
group
of (45-54) was
male’s
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male
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consuming with
highest
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the highest
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variation at 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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