The bar chart illustrates population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040.

The bar chart illustrates population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040.
The given bar shows the number of population trends globally between 1950 and 2040. The units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that almost all the trends in both population and age structure increased except the rural ones, which stayed constant in the given period. In terms of the highest number in
population
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the population
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, the total of
people
stood at just above 10%, it remained at its top and
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a trough at about 45% in the
last
period. The number of
people
living in Urban and Rural areas,
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started at about 7% and 5%, respectively.
People
in urban areas
then
rose dramatically at approximately 38% in 2040, whilst those in rural areas remained steady at almost 5% throughout the period. Regarding the age structure trends,
people
in the age of 15-65 were the most popular all the years, it reached a peak, accounting for exactly 35% in the final year.
However
, the other two started at about 2.5 in 1950 and are expected to have a slight climb to just above 5 in 2024.
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