The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at a line graph provided reveals the amount of consumed meat including chicken, beef, lamb and fish, measured in
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Overall
, There was a recessive growth pattern witnessed in almost all data, except for the consumption of fish. Linking Words
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regard
to beef’s consumption is the highest compared to other categories. Change the verb form
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Its
fluctuated at approximately 200 Correct pronoun usage
It
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from 1979 to 1989 before sliding away consistently to around 100 Fix the agreement mistake
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this
is a trough in 2004. In terms of the consumption of lamb and chicken consumed. Linking Words
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Although
, they had Correct word choice
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paly
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nearly
150 grams. But there were differences in the level of growth pattern, Change preposition
of nearly
while
the former exploded continuously to 250 Linking Words
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which is the peak of its Fix the agreement mistake
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in
the Change preposition
at
year end
, the latter declined consistently to merely 50 and 100 in 2004. The only show that in the chart, Add a hyphen
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on the contrary
, the consumed amount of fish is the sole remained unswerving round at 50 Linking Words
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during 25 years.Fix the agreement mistake
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