The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given pie charts illustrate the number of four different
type
of transportation Change to a plural noun
types
vehicles
prefered
in the UK in several years (1996,1985, and 2005).
Correct your spelling
preferred
Overall
, it is evident that the proportion of private cars using
had Wrong verb form
used
highest
in all years Correct article usage
the highest
whereas
the using
of recreational Replace the word
use
vehicles
had lowest
value. Change the article
the lowest
To begin
with, in 1965, the preference of
Change preposition
for
personal
car's amount was 40% and Correct article usage
a personal
this
proportion increased in the last
40 years. In 1985, the rate of special
Add an article
the special
car
was 55% and it reached 60% in Fix the agreement mistake
cars
the
2005. Public transport Change the article
apply
using
had had 25% in 1965 and it decreased until 1985, generally it Replace the word
use
shown
that Wrong verb form
shows
fluctuated
situation. Wrong verb form
fluctuating
Additionally
, the percentage of public transport was 22% in 2005. Lorries and other vehicles
's using
remained Replace the word
use
same
in 1965 and 1985 Correct article usage
the same
then
this
ratio droped
sharply. Correct your spelling
dropped
Furthermore
, the
travelling by lorries or Correct article usage
apply
other type
of Change the wording
another type
other types
vehicles
became halfed
in 2005.
Correct your spelling
halved
On the other hand
, recreational vehicles
Change the noun form
vehicle
utilizer
was 15% in given Replace the word
utilisation
first
year and it declined to 5% in 1985. From 1985 to 2005, the Change the article
the first
recrational
transport user rose again.Correct your spelling
recreational
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