One of your friend lives in another country. You want to spend time working in that country. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, you should: •describe why you want to work in that country; •tell him/her about your skills and experience; •ask some questions related to work (wage, salary)
#friend #lives #country #time #friends #•describe #work #•tell #skills #•ask #questions #wage #salary
Dear Dilay,
How is going on? I hope you are well. I missed you a lot! I'
m
very happy for
your new job in Manchester,congratulations!It's well deserved.
As you know I'Change preposition
about
m
currently living in Ankara. It's a very small town. Although
it is cute
city Add an article
the cute
a cute
but
there are no job opportunities Remove the conjunction
apply
unfortunately
.
I was graduated from Ankara University Add the comma(s)
, unfortunately
last
year. My bachelor
degree is Change noun form
bachelor's
Food
Science. Change preposition
in Food
Industry
isn't grown enough in Ankara city. Add an article
The industry
I'
Wrong verb form
I've been
m
looking for a job for 1 year but still couldn't
Wrong verb form
can't
find
.
I had an internship for 3 months in Danone Correct pronoun usage
find one
last
summer. In here
, I experienced Change preposition
Here
about
research and development and production departments. I'Change preposition
apply
m
really good at communication.How is salary
range in Manchester ? Do you have any benefit? Health insurance, Correct article usage
the salary
addition
payment etc. Replace the word
additional
Actually
I would love to work in Manchester. Can you inform me if there is a proper position for me ?
It'll be great if you can help me out on Add a comma
Actually,
this
. Say hello to your family.
Keep in touch!
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logical structure
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Separate ideas into distinct paragraphs.
greeting and closing
Good use of greeting and closing. It helps to set the tone of the letter.
single idea per paragraph
Try to focus on one main idea in each paragraph as to convey your message more clearly. For example, dedicate one solely to your skills, one to your experience, and another to your queries about work.
complete response
You addressed the tasks well by describing your situation, asking about the job market, and inquiring about benefits. However, ensuring you cover each point thoroughly will enhance your response.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitably informal and friendly for writing to a friend, but be careful with the flow and structure to maintain professionalism.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,