The bar chart belows shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of men and women Use synonyms
in
different ages who did physical activity regularly in Australia in 2010.
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of
Overall
, in all Linking Words
age
groups, women were more active than men, except for the Use synonyms
age
group of 15 to 24 Use synonyms
years
.
Of the male Use synonyms
age
groups listed, the biggest Use synonyms
percentage
belonged to 15-24 Use synonyms
years
old, with 52.8% Use synonyms
while
the lowest Linking Words
percentage
belonged to 35-44 Use synonyms
years
old. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, of the female Linking Words
age
groups listed, 45-54 Use synonyms
years
old had the highest Use synonyms
percentage
, with 53.3% Use synonyms
while
those who were 65 Linking Words
years
or older, had the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
, with 47.1.
The biggest difference was in the Use synonyms
age
group of 35 to 44 Use synonyms
years
and the smallest difference was in the Use synonyms
age
group of 65 Use synonyms
years
and above.Use synonyms
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