The bar chart belows shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of men and women in
different ages who did physical activity regularly in Australia in 2010.
Change preposition
of
Overall
, in all age
groups, women were more active than men, except for the age
group of 15 to 24 years
.
Of the male age
groups listed, the biggest percentage
belonged to 15-24 years
old, with 52.8% while
the lowest percentage
belonged to 35-44 years
old. On the other hand
, of the female age
groups listed, 45-54 years
old had the highest percentage
, with 53.3% while
those who were 65 years
or older, had the lowest percentage
, with 47.1.
The biggest difference was in the age
group of 35 to 44 years
and the smallest difference was in the age
group of 65 years
and above.Submitted by kk.1379 on
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