The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.
The pie charts
illustrates
the change Change the verb form
illustrate
of
the percentage Change preposition
in
in
Change preposition
of
energy
capacity
in 2040 compared to 2015.
Overall
, the proportions of energy
capacity
in fossil fuels is
declined, Verb problem
has
while
the solar energy
and wind source
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sources
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
rise
. The former will remain a major Wrong verb form
rising
energy
source in 2040.
It is clear that
in 2015 fossil fuels were the largest proportion of energy
capacity
, at 64%. Which drop to 44% in 2040 as
well as other renewables Rephrase
apply
that
the percentage will Correct word choice
apply
be
decline by 2%. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
, the nuclear power will fall from 6% to 5%.
On the other hand
, wind power capacity
will grow from 5% to 12%, which is more double
in 2015. The greatest change in rise is solar power, the percentage in 2015 was 2% Change preposition
than double
will
multiply Correct word choice
and will
in
9 times in 2040, at 18%.Change preposition
apply
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