The charts (line chart and bar chart) show the average ticket prices and average percentage of tickets sold in Merrintong theatre in the four quarters from 2010 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts (line chart and bar chart) show the average ticket prices and average percentage of tickets sold in Merrintong theatre in the four quarters from 2010 to 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the average ticket prices which are shown in pounds,
while
the bar chart visually shows the proportion of tickets sold in Merrintong theatre between 2010 and 2011 which is presented quarterly.
It is clear that
both ticket rates and the percentage of tickets sold were generally increased.
According to
the bar graph, the percentage of tickets sold stood at 20% in 2010, and after that, the numbers gradually increased to more than a third in the fourth quarter of 2010. In the next quarter, the number dropped to 30%
,
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and recovered to manage the growth until it reached
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half in the
last
quarter of 2011. Regarding the line graph, the rates started at 5.2 and gradually decreased for about 4 quarters which
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at about 10.5 in the first term of 2011. And
then
, the number plunged to 9.2 in the next term And in the next 2 terms, the number remained stable at 10.5.
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