The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates how
bricks
are produced for the building industry.
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Overall
, there are 7 main steps, starting with the digging stages and ending with distributing to retailers.
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To begin
with, the main material in Linking Words
this
process is clay, which is harnessed before Linking Words
this
ingredient is filtered and processed in a roller machine. Linking Words
Subsequently
, the result of the previous step is mixed with sand and water. The mixture is ready to be kept in a mould or cut in a wire cutter to be in the raw shape of the Linking Words
bricks
.
In the next step, the raw Use synonyms
bricks
are dried in a machine for 24 to 48 hours. Use synonyms
Then
, moving to a kiln, they are kept Linking Words
in
moderate and high Change preposition
at
temperature
, up to 1300 degrees Celsius and Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
finished
the drying stages in a cooling chamber for around 48 to 72 hours. Wrong verb form
finish
After
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this
step, the completed Linking Words
bricks
are packed and shipped to customers by specialized vehicles.Use synonyms
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