People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days more and more
people
using credit
cards
.the main way monthly purchases
. While
accepting that. I consider that more prone and cons. In this
essay, I will discuss about cons.
On one hand, some of them use credit
cards
they use it overbalanced to more and more cone. A lot of people
make monthly purchases
they don't
know they are spending more using credit
cards
. But some of them are not necessary. For the more, people
can have difficulty managing finances because they come to a lot of problems with credit
cards
. For instance
, last
month I purchased a website for electronic devices. They are expensive and they do not work well. Moreover
. Some of the websites are fake. Who doesn't
know that they purchase
some tiny things but they take our personal credit
number and they can have a system. who is an account and they can take all the money.
On the other hand
, there are several benefits to using credit
cards
to make monthly purchases
. A common prons is they can purchase
easily. When someone purchase
they can Change the verb form
purchases
purchases
automatically. Change the verb form
purchase
For instance
, last
month my mobail
phone bills were paid for my Correct your spelling
mobile
credit
card. Which is helpful for no need to go anywhere.therefore
, it can help people
when they don't
have to money purchase
on credit
cards
.
In conclusion, if some one
using to Correct your spelling
someone
credit
card they won't
know about financial management. They can use it very carefully and if someone uses outweigh they can control it and I think more than better-used cash.Submitted by manushamanu1024 on
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coherence cohesion
The essay lacks a clear opening thesis statement that directly addresses the prompt question. Cohesive devices and paragraphs structures are inconsistently used, making the essay's arguments difficult to follow.
task achievement
The task is not fully addressed as the essay does not properly discuss the advantages of using credit cards. The balance between advantages and disadvantages is missing, and the prompt is not addressed comprehensively.