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You made a mistake in the classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: ● state your apology ● describe the situation ● write about your promise to change.

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Dear Mr Bill I am writing to apologise for the late first lesson.
Due to
 I went to go wedding day of my brother and I went away there with my family . Thanks to we were very tired
last
 evening and I late went to bed. Please accept my sincerest apologies for missing the literature lesson.I will try not to be late again. I hope you will accept my apologies. Yours sincerely, Lobar
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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph contains a single idea, maintain clear logical progression throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Include a clear opening and closing paragraph, greeting the reader appropriately and signing off correctly.
task achievement
Focus on the completeness of the response, addressing all parts of the task in sufficient detail.
task achievement
Use an appropriate tone considering the formality of the situation, which includes polite expressions and formal language when writing to a teacher.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • apologize
  • inconvenience
  • regret
  • unintentional
  • misunderstanding
  • own up
  • responsibility
  • remorse
  • commitment
  • ensure
  • attentive
  • clarification
  • improvement
  • genuine
  • impact
  • sincerely
  • acknowledge
  • positive sentiment
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