The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph depicts detailed information on the proportion of females going into higher education in five nations(UK,USA, Australia, South
Korea
, France) for the years 1980 and 2015. Units are measured in percentage From an
overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen that the indicators for each time period are the same in Australia. The lowest percentages are made up in South
Korea
. As far as
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and the USA are concerned, in 1980 the percentage of literate women increased by over 30 percent, approximately 33% and 38% respectively. When it comes to 2015, the proportions almost reached
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60%,
whereas
in Australia it reached more or less the same point about 58%. In terms of South
Korea
and France, both countries demonstrated an increasing tendency until 2015. In South
Korea
, the indicator went up from 13% to 50%,
while
in France it grew from 30 per cent to 52 per cent.
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