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The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.

The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
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The pie charts give information about the average percentage of
sodium
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, saturated fats and added
sugar
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 in common meals consumed in the USA. The initial impression is that
sodium
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 added to
dinner
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 has the highest proportion,
while
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 the lowest percentage of nutrients is
sodium
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 in
lunch
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 and
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snakes
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snacks
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. It can be seen from the graphs that
sodium
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 is poured into
dinner
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 more than other meals which is just over four out of ten.
However
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,
sodium
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 added to
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snakes
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snacks
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 and
lunch
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 is about three times less than
dinner
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 which is the least rate.
Additionally
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, the fraction of saturated fat in
dinner
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 is over a third and is the largest proportion compared to the other meals.
Sugar
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 and saturated fat have the smallest fraction in breakfast a bit over one-sixth. Added
sugar
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,
whereas
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, is mostly used in
snakes
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, whose rate is almost 40%.
According to
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 the figures, in breakfast, the maximum proportions of nutrients are fat and
sugar
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 with approximately under a fifth and the minimum percentage of them is
sodium
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 which is just 2 % less than the others.
Also
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,
sodium
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 and added
sugar
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 have the most and the least fractions in
lunch
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, respectively and
sodium
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 is 10 % more than
sugar
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.
In contrast
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 to
lunch
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, the rate of
sugar
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 in
snakes
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 is around four times more than the proportion of
sodium
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 which are the highest and the lowest nutrients. In
dinner
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,
moreover
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,
sodium
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 is the major category and
sugar
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 is the minor category with 43% and 23%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, dinner, lunch, snakes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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