The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in hudroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the

process

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of

electricity

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production in a hydroelectric

power

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station

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.The

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begins when the

water

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flows

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from the

river

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to the high-level

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and it ends with the transmission of

electricity

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to the national grid.

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, what stands out from

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is that

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the

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is broadly distributed into

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and

night

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stages with

a daylight stages

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a daylight stage

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involving

electricity

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production from the

river

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and storage of

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in

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reservoir

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the reservoir

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. At

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the

water

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flows

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back in the opposite direction towards an initial

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and the

river

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. The

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stage of

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involves channelling the

river

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water

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into a high-level

reservoir

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backed up by a dam.There is an intake area leading to the

power

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station

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that opens during the

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and closes at

night

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.

Water

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flows

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during the

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to generate

electricity

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through the

power

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station

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turbins

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turbines

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. The generated

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is

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sent to a national grid through

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lines

while

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the excess

water

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runs to a low-level

reservoir

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. During the

night

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stage, the

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stored in the low-level

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is reverted to the

power

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station

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and the

turbins

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turbines

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of the generator pump it back into the high-level

reservoir

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which is closed during the

night

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. The

river

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water

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is stored at the upper level and later it

flows

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down, starting the cycle again.