The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.
The charts illustrate the generation and request for
steel
in million
tons and the number of individuals working for the steel
industry in the UK in the whole year
of 2010.
looking from an overall
perspective it is readily apparent that the production of steel
during the whole year
although
had fluctuation, showed a downward trend, in contrast
, the demand figure witnessed an upward trend during the given year
.
From the given graph it can be seen that steel
generation in January was about 4000 million
tonnes
during 4 months
it experienced a sharp increase which reached a peak of nearly 5000 million
tonnes
after that it decreased to 4000 million
tonnes
and it remained unchanged during about 4 months
after that figure displays decline to just over 3000 million
tonnes
by the August then
production of steel
reached to the highest point again to approximately 5000 million
tonnes
by the following two month after that it plunge to just under 1000 million
tonnes
in December.
On the other hand
, the demand figure witnessed a variation from January to August which throughout these months
it rose to the highest point of almost 3000 million
tonnes
and the lowest point of fewer than 2000 million
tonnes
, but it showed a substantial decrease to nearly 0 million
tonnes
in last
two months
of the given year
and then
it rocket to 2000 million
tonnes
in December.Submitted by mahsa.ghorbandoust71 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words steel, million, year, tonnes, months with synonyms.
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