The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.
The charts illustrate the generation and request for
steel
in
million
tons and the number of individuals working for the
steel
industry in the UK in the whole
year
of 2010. looking from an
overall
perspective it is readily apparent that the production of
steel
during the whole
year
although
had fluctuation, showed a downward trend,
in contrast
, the demand figure witnessed an upward trend during the given
year
. From the given graph it can be seen that
steel
generation in January was about 4000
million
tonnes
during 4
months
it experienced a sharp increase which reached a peak of nearly 5000
million
tonnes
after that it decreased to 4000
million
tonnes
and it remained unchanged during about 4
months
after that figure displays decline to just over 3000
million
tonnes
by the August
then
production of
steel
reached to the highest point again to approximately 5000
million
tonnes
by the following two month after that it plunge to just under 1000
million
tonnes
in December.
On the other hand
, the demand figure witnessed a variation from January to August which throughout these
months
it rose to the highest point of almost 3000
million
tonnes
and the lowest point of fewer than 2000
million
tonnes
, but it showed a substantial decrease to nearly 0
million
tonnes
in
last
two
months
of the given
year
and
then
it rocket to 2000
million
tonnes
in December.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words steel, million, year, tonnes, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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