You rent an apartment. you want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment , describe the repairs that need to be made and explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life.

Dear Mr.Smith, I am Mary who rent your single bedroom
appartment
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apartment
on 6th avenue
last
weak.As I am
student
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a student
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in
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at
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university
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a university
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in your town and I live alone , the place location is suitable and the flat is
conviniant
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convenient
for me, so I like it very much.Yet there are some problems in the kitchen which need to
addressed
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, like
oven
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the oven
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and sink that I try to explain the matter .The oven heat is not working correctly and its low
tempreture
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temperature
reduce
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reduces
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my cooking speed
also
the external sink's pipe
maybe
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may be
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closed by fat waste or something else which causes not
passing
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the water.Should these small problems be solved ,I would spend my time happier at home .Your fast action will be appreciated in
this
regard. Sincerly Yours, Mary Adams
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure you organize your ideas clearly, perhaps with one paragraph for what you like about the apartment, another for the repair issues, and a final one for the impact on your quality of life.
Coherence and Cohesion
Avoid common spelling and grammar mistakes to improve the comprehensibility of your letter. Pay attention to verb tenses and sentence structure.
Task Achievement
Make sure to follow conventional letter formatting, with appropriate introduction and closing phrases, and check for typographical errors in names and addresses.
Task Achievement
For a better score, always address the tasks as completely as possible; state clearly what you like, describe the repairs needed, and explain how fixing these issues will improve your living quality.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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