The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to English in 2000 and 2010
The charts give information about the
percentage
of England pupils at one
institute,in the UK who can communicate in other languages,in addition
to English in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
,It is explicit that the Spanish language
speaking percentage
by English students
at one
university was more than 30 % in both years 2000 and 2010.
In detail,It stands out that,30% of pupils from one
university could speak Spanish in England in 2000,as compared to the
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students
can speak the same language
in 2010 in England.15% of pupils could speak another language
, at one
university in 2000,Which increased to 20% in 2010 in the UK.The proportion of students
,who can speak,another two languages also
rose from 10%(2000) to 15% in 2010.
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on the other hand
,the percentage
of students
at one
institution in Britain who could speak no other language
decreased from 20% in 2000 to 10% in 2010.The French speaker's proportion also
dropped from 15% to 10%,from 2000 to 2010 respectively.
However
,students
percentage
who can speak German
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the German
language
, remained at 10% the same in both mentioned
years 2000 and 2010.Correct article usage
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