Two maps show the change of a coastal town called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two maps visually illustrate the transformation of a coastal town named Petland, from 1950 to 2007.
Overall
, the place has become more urbanised than 57 years ago. There are a few facilities for the community and some places related to the farming business have been demolished.
To begin
with, at the moment, there is a yacht marina docked on the seaside. Next,
in the northeast, apartments have been built. And go to the east, many shops added, while
the car park has been removed from there. Moving to the southeast, houses had been constructed on the grassland.
If we walk across the road, In the southwest, there is a new cinema replacing the cornfield. Then
, the multi-storey car park was moved to the west, and a swimming pool was added to this
side as well, whereas
the industrial area is no longer on this
coast. Finally
, on the left corner, a park had been formed at the left corner.Submitted by erniwbs on
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