You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work Write a letter to your manager and say What problem do you have What difficulties does this create for you What could be done about it.
Dear Mr. Rayansh ,
I am Pallavi working in
Human
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the Human
Resource
Department as a Senior Talent Acquisition in your organisation. Fix the agreement mistake
Resources
i
would like to bring Change the capitalization
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in
your notice that my computer Change preposition
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is
not working properly since Verb problem
has
last
week . Even though i
have raised the ticket in Change the capitalization
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IT
department but still Correct article usage
the IT
this
issue has not been resolved .
This
laptop has been
issued to me at Wrong verb form
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time
of my joining almost six years ago . I believe before iME someone else was using Correct article usage
the time
this
. There are many problems with my device i.e
my computer screen turns black automatically within Correct your spelling
i.e.
a
hour from starting time and it is not even showing any Change the article
an
pop up
on the screen and Add a hyphen
pop-up
few
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a few
key words
are not working properly .Correct your spelling
keywords
Therefore
, because of this
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this,
i
can not save my daily work which leads a frustration and l Change the capitalization
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also
loose
my focus Replace the word
lose
from
my work.
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i
have to find the candidates on Change the capitalization
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job
portal to close all positions in the organisation . Correct article usage
the job
Additionally
, I have to maintain the data and send those reports to my manager on daily
basis which is not possible without Add an article
a daily
computer
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a computer
this
reason also
affecting on
my work productivity.
Request you to please allow me to use my personal laptop Wrong verb form
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on
premises
until Correct article usage
the premises
this
issue is resolved or replace my laptop so that i
can perform my job Change the capitalization
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responsiblities
well.
Regards
PallaviCorrect your spelling
responsibilities
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logical structure
Ensure that the letter has a clear structure, including an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, each serving a distinct purpose.
greeting and closing
Work on correctly formatting greetings and sign-offs in formal letters; for instance, use a comma after the salutation 'Dear Mr. Rayansh,' and end the letter with a formal sign-off followed by a comma.
single idea per paragraph
Maintain a singular focus in each paragraph to convey your message cleanly and without confusion, which you have handled well in this letter.
complete response
Address all parts of the prompt clearly, providing specific details to increase the response's effectiveness.
suitable writing tone
Adopt a consistently formal tone suitable for the workplace, avoiding casual language and ensuring the use of professional formulations, including mentioning your designation and department up front.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite