The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The chart bar above illustrates the
amount
of people who eat fruit and vegetables in Change the quantifier
number
UK
. From the data, we can see that there is no trend regarding Correct article usage
the UK
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
consumption
of that food from 2002, 2006, and 2010.
In general, women
are the one
who predominant over the yearsCorrect pronoun usage
ones
stated
. Compared with Verb problem
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men
and children, their consumption
are
the highest especially in 2006 when the number Change the verb form
is
reach
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reached
it
peak at more than 30% of the population.
In 2002, fruit and vegetables Change the pronoun
its
get
the lowest Verb problem
had
consumption
regardless the gender, men
(above 20%), women
(almost 25%), and children (only around 10%). Among the years in the data, children consume less than men
and women
. In 2006, their consumption
up
above 15%. Meanwhile, in 2010, their percentage Add a missing verb
was up
goes
down Wrong verb form
went
under
15%. Change preposition
to under
In addition
, men
get almost 25% of the population, but women
reach more than 25%.Submitted by mmmuuu on
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