You recently notice a local restaurant that was offering a part-time Job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. •Explain that you would like to apply for the job •Give some details of any relevant experience that you have •Specify the days and times that would suit you.
Dear Manager ,
I am Pari , I have seen an advertisement in
local
newspaper that you are offering a Add an article
the local
a local
part time
job. I would like to apply for Add a hyphen
part-time
this
post because of few
reasons .
Correct article usage
a few
Firstly
I am pursuing Bachelor's degree in hotel management and my college is very near to your restaurant , so after my class easily I can work there from Monday to Friday and I will be available at
4 PM to 8PM. Change preposition
from
Secondly
, I have a few months experience
in Change preposition
of experience
similar
field as during my summer vacation I always support my uncle in his bakery business. Add an article
a similar
Moreover
, I want to earn some money so that I can bear my own expenditure
and it would be helpful for my family too because during Covid 19 my father lost his job. Replace the word
expenses
In
addition
as I mentioned earlier I am doing my graduation in Add a comma
addition,
similar
field and Add an article
a similar
the similar
wiling
to work in Correct your spelling
willing
restaurant
after completion of my course.
If I get Correct article usage
a restaurant
this
opportunity , I would be thankful to you because as
your restaurant is one of the reputed Correct word choice
apply
hotel
in the city and it will give Change to a plural noun
hotels
added
advantage Add an article
an added
in
my resume. Request you to please consider my profile.
Looking for Change preposition
to
positive
reply.
Thank you
PariAdd an article
a positive
the positive
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the structure of your letter includes a clear beginning, middle, and end. Use separate paragraphs to introduce the purpose of the letter, detail your qualifications, and finalize your request or offer availabilities.
coherence cohesion
Utilize appropriate letter conventions with a proper salutation at the start (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's Name],' if known, or 'Dear Manager,') and a formal closing salutation ('Yours sincerely,' followed by your full name).
task achievement
Expand on your relevant experience by providing more details and examples that relate directly to the restaurant job to strengthen the task response.
task achievement
Adopt a more formal and polite writing tone. Avoid informal language and use complete sentences. Make sure every sentence contributes to the purpose of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,