The pie charts compare the amount of online shopping sales for retail parts in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Moreover, those are divided into four categories: travel, film/music, book, and clothes.
The provided pie charts illustrate the contribution of four different categories of online shopping in New Zealand in two separate years: 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it is clearly observable that in 2003, travel
was the most popular sector among consumers in New Zealand, whereas
in 2013, the film/music category accounted for the most prominent sales
.
In 2003, the percentages of sales
for travel
and clothes, which were the most popular groups in this
year, stood at 36% and 24%, respectively, whereas
those of films/music and books sectors were lower at approximately 20%. From this
year until 2013, the proportions of sales
associated with both film/music and books saw a growth of 12% and 3%, respectively. By contrast
, the money that is
earned from two other sectors, travel
and clothes, experienced a downtrend, where the figure for sales
of travel
fell by 7% and that for clothes declined from nearly one-quarter to one-sixth, making it the least attractive shopping category in 2013.Submitted by m.r.zamani1376678 on
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