The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The provided chart illustrates data about how much money was donated by categorizing

age

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groups of British people in comparison from 1990 to 2010.

Overall

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, what stands out from the chart is that people gave more money to charity in 1990 than in 2010, except the senior

citizen

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citizens

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above 51

years

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old. Looking at the details, people in the

age

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up to 50

has

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have

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significantly

drop

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dropped

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the amount of charity by

average

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an average

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of 5%. The

age

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group of 36 to 50

years

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old made charitable donations just above 40% in 1990,

made

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making

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it to the highest percentage across the

age

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groups.

Then

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, the figure drops significantly by 7% to 35%. Meanwhile, the youngsters (

age

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18 to 25) donated from 17% to 7% two decades later, placing them

the

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in the

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least

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lowest

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percentage of

donation

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donations

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made.

In contrast

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the 51

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years

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old and above

citizen

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citizens

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rose remarkably by

average

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an average

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of 6%.

Initially

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, the 51-65

years

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old group had 35%

donation

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donations

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, after rocketing to 40%, it placed them as the most charitable

age

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group in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

171 words

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The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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While many advocate for the necessity of obtaining a higher education, others argue that it is not essential for success in today’s diverse job market. Discuss both views regarding the necessity of higher education and give your opinion.

The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assignments over the school year. What do you think of this trend?