The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The provided chart illustrates data about how much money was donated by categorizing
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groups of British people in comparison from 1990 to 2010.
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, what stands out from the chart is that people gave more money to charity in 1990 than in 2010, except the senior
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citizens
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above 51
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old. Looking at the details, people in the
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up to 50
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significantly
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the amount of charity by
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an average
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of 5%. The
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group of 36 to 50
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old made charitable donations just above 40% in 1990,
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it to the highest percentage across the
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groups.
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, the figure drops significantly by 7% to 35%. Meanwhile, the youngsters (
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18 to 25) donated from 17% to 7% two decades later, placing them
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least
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lowest
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percentage of
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donations
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made.
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,
51
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the 51
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years
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old and above
citizen
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citizens
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rose remarkably by
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an average
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of 6%.
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, the 51-65
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old group had 35%
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donations
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, after rocketing to 40%, it placed them as the most charitable
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group in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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