The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates data about how much money was donated by categorizing
age
groups of British people in comparison from 1990 to 2010. Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that people gave more money to charity in 1990 than in 2010, except the senior citizen
above 51 Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
years
old.
Looking at the details, people in the age
up to 50 has
significantly Correct subject-verb agreement
have
drop
the amount of charity by Change the verb form
dropped
average
of 5%. The Add an article
an average
age
group of 36 to 50 years
old made charitable donations just above 40% in 1990, made
it to the highest percentage across the Wrong verb form
making
age
groups. Then
, the figure drops significantly by 7% to 35%.
Meanwhile, the youngsters (age
18 to 25) donated from 17% to 7% two decades later, placing them the
Change preposition
in the
least
percentage of Correct word choice
lowest
donation
made. Fix the agreement mistake
donations
In contrast
, 51
Correct article usage
the 51
years
old and above citizen
rose remarkably by Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
average
of 6%. Add an article
an average
Initially
, the 51-65 years
old group had 35% donation
, after rocketing to 40%, it placed them as the most charitable Fix the agreement mistake
donations
age
group in 2010.Submitted by hilmi.santiago.alif on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
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