The line chart below shows the annual fish consumption per capita in various regions from 1980 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates the annual fish consumption per

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in various places in 40 years from 1980 to 2020. in general, it can be seen that all regions (

Asia

Europe

, North

America

and South

America

) showed an upward trend with

Asia

reached

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the highest number

while

South

America

was the smallest. In 1980,

theres

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there's

a slightly different

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between

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Asia

(under 20) and

Europe

(at 20).

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1990,

Asia

experienced far fewer

from

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than

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asia

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Asia

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just about 25 and both

Asia

and

Europe

rise

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rose

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gradually.

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From

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2010 to 2020,

Asia

increased significantly under 55 and

get

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got

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the highest fish consumption. Same as

Asia

and

Europe

, both North and South

America

went up significantly, from

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apply

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10 and under 10 in 1980 and

end

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ended

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with

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above 25 and at 30, respectively. From the lone chart can be seen that in 2010, North

America

and South

America

reached the same number just about 25.

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