The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of men and women teachers in six various kinds of educational
institution
in the UK in 2010.
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institutions
Overall
, there are six types of educational organizations in Britain with the highest difference between men and women in Nursery/Pre-School, Primary School and University.
Turning to the details, the first two educational categories that
are Nursery/Pre-School and Primary school had Correct pronoun usage
which
the
significant difference between men and women Correct article usage
a
with
reaching the percentage of the latter one Change preposition
apply
that
was approximately 90% which was 20 and 10 times higher than Correct pronoun usage
which
male
.
As for the second category, which is male, we can see that with the rising Fix the agreement mistake
males
of
level of Change preposition
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education
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education,
this
category started to be dominant in the last
item that
was University, reaching almost 70%. Correct pronoun usage
which
This
percentage was twice higher
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as high
than
the Change preposition
as
female’s
Change noun form
females
one
. Considering the other three categories, they were almost equal with the proportion of almost Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
half in both genders.Correct article usage
apply
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