The line graph gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the data about the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
tourists
in thousands to three
museums located in London from June
to September in
2013.
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apply
Overall
, there are three
lines
, namely British
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the British
Museum
, Natural History
Museum
and Science Museum
, where the first one has the highest point of people, attending this
place, with some fluctuations, whereas
the other two illustrate a lower tendency of visiting these places.
Turning to the details, British
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the British
Museum
started from
roughly 600 Change preposition
with
thousand
visitors
in June
, that
was the highest in the beginning. Natural Correct pronoun usage
which
History
Museum
had a lower attendance at approximately 550 thousand
tourists
in the same month, that
was the highest number for Correct pronoun usage
which
this
line during four months. The last
one, which was Science
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the Science
Museum
, started from
400 Change preposition
with
thousand
of
people, Change preposition
apply
that
was the lowest figure between Correct pronoun usage
which
three
lines
in June
. The second month of the summer shows different numbers and opposite movement of lines
. To be specific, British
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the British
Museum
saw upward
trend to 750 Add an article
an upward
the upward
thousand
of
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apply
visitors
, that was the peak between three
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the three
lines
and during the whole period of summer. As for the other two lines
, they experienced downward
trend to just under 400 Correct article usage
a downward
thousand
of
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apply
tourists
.
Moving to August, it shows also
various fluctuations between three
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the three
lines
. Although
National
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the National
History
Museum
levelled off from July to August, this
line increased slightly to 490 thousand
of
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apply
visitors
, that
was slightly lower than it was in Correct pronoun usage
which
June
. At the same time British
Museum
had decreased from 750 thousand
to 500 thousand
of
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apply
tourists
, but then
it increased to 650 thousand
of
people in September. The Change preposition
apply
last
line continued the starting trend, reaching 300 thousand
of
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apply
visitors
in August, but then
it grew till
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to
the
number, that was a bit lower than Correct article usage
a
Natural
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the Natural
History
of Museum
’s figure.Submitted by zavkidm on
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