the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts below illustrate the number of British
students
at one university in England who spoke other languages
in addition
to English over a ten-year period between 2000 and 2010. In general, it can be seen that there was a significant downward trend in students
who could speak French.
In 2000, German and two other languages
had the lowest percentages among all of them.
However
, the German language was the only one that remained stable after 10 years. There was a considerable rise in Spanish, which was the most popular language among students
over a decade. As you can see, there was an upward trend in Two other and Another languages
, which meant students
in 2010 were from all around the globe. There was a sharp rise in students
who could speak at least two languages
after ten years.
Finally
, Spanish was still the most popular language among all of them. Nonetheless
, French was less popular, and also
German was still the same after a decade.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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