The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure gives information about the monthly price changes of Copper,Nickel and Zinc in 2014.
Overall
, Nickel had the most change and the other materials fluctuated in that year.
Primarily,Nickel had a 6per cent difference with
the previous month but it had a significant fall in the next five months and Change preposition
from
finally
stopped with the percentage of -3 .Then
, the line remained constant until September and in November and December
it Add a comma
December,
grows
to around one per cent.
Wrong verb form
grew
On the other hand
, The two other metals,
had some slight rises and drops during 2014. The most stable material was Copper and it was generally near a percent.Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, in May and June
it Add a comma
June,
decrease
to below Change the verb form
decreases
the
zero.The Correct article usage
apply
last
material had the least price fluctuation at the beginning however
, in the next month this
parameter became three times more and in the two final months of 2014 it became the most unstable metal.Submitted by mohammad.bameri.1380 on
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