The bar chart below shows percentages of three groups of Australian children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
rate
of ladies and gents in 6 different age
groups regular physical activity in Australia during 2010.
Overall
, all aged
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age
group
of Australian women preferred physical activities Fix the agreement mistake
groups
than
men except Change preposition
to
youngest
Correct article usage
the youngest
age
group
.
In 2010, 15-24 aged men's physical activity rate
was 52.8% as
the highest number in the year. But, after Change preposition
apply
age
25 it showed decline
and the lowest percentage Add an article
a decline
reported
in Add a missing verb
was reported
35
-44 Correct article usage
the 35
aged
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age
group
. Furthermore
, 45
-54, 55-64, and over 65 aged individuals workout Correct article usage
the 45
rate
were increased modestly to 43.1%, 45.5% and 46.7% respectively.
In terms of women, 15-24 years olds
was 47.7% and Correct your spelling
old
then
the figure started to rise gradually according to
the
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apply
age
. However
, 35-44, 45-54 and 55-64 aged
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age
group
rates were above 50%. In comparison to gents ladies physical activity rate
was higher by 0.4% of old ages.Submitted by ranasinghenadeeshani07 on
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