The bar chart below shows shares of expenditure for five major categories in the United States , Canada, the United Kingdom and Japan in the year 2009.
he
bar chart represents portions of spending for different important sectors (food, housing Correct your spelling
The
transportation
, health care) in four separate countries ( United States, Canada, United Kingdom, Japan) in 2009
Overall
, almost every country share
their most expenditure for food ,housing and Correct subject-verb agreement
shares
transportation
while
they contributed
least for health care and clothing.
In terms of food, housing and Wrong verb form
contribute
transportation
, USA
Correct article usage
the USA
contributed
Verb problem
spent
most
Correct article usage
the most
for
housing which was about 26% , Change preposition
on
on the other hand
, Japan spent only 10% for
Change preposition
on
transportation
which was the least significant among these 3 aforementioned sectors. Canada shared nearly same
for housing and Correct article usage
the same
transportation
and that was about 21% and 20^ respectively.
In relation to health-care
and clothing,Correct your spelling
health care
Correct article usage
the
Canda
spent about 7% which was the highest among all the countries.Correct your spelling
Canada
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