The bar chart below shows shares of expenditure for five major categories in the United States , Canada, the United Kingdom and Japan in the year 2009.

The bar chart below shows shares of expenditure for five major categories in the United States , Canada, the United Kingdom and Japan in the year 2009.
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bar chart represents portions of spending for different important sectors (food, housing
transportation
, health care) in four separate countries ( United States, Canada, United Kingdom, Japan) in 2009
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, almost every country
share
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their most expenditure for food ,housing and
transportation
while
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least for health care and clothing. In terms of food, housing and
transportation
,
USA
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the USA
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contributed
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most
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for
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housing which was about 26% ,
on the other hand
, Japan spent only 10%
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transportation
which was the least significant among these 3 aforementioned sectors. Canada shared nearly
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the same
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for housing and
transportation
and that was about 21% and 20^ respectively. In relation to
health-care
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health care
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and clothing,
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UK made up the smallest investment about 2% for health care but
Canda
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Canada
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spent about 7% which was the highest among all the countries.
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