The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The table and chart below respectively show the consequence of a survey about how many
people
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consume
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consumed
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tea
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or
coffee
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, during
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last
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the last
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4 weeks in five Australian cities.
Overall
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,
Although
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, many
of
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apply
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people
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visited
cafe
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cafes
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for bought
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to buy
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both
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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drinks during that period time, at least in 4 cities except Adelaide, we have
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other results
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about
people
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who just visited there
for bought
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to buy
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instant
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or fresh
coffee
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. In Melbourne and
Hobart
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Hobart,
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63% of
people
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vistited
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visited
for drank
tea
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or
coffee
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,
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, after that,
survey
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a survey
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shows us that
drank
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drinking
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instant
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coffee
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in
Hobalt
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Hobart
and Melbourne is more popular than fresh
coffees
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coffee
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.
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This
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results estimated,
in
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that in
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Hobalt, 54% of
people
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paid for
instant
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coffee
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and just 38% paid for fresh
coffee
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in
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last
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the last
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4 weeks.
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in Melbourne survey outcomes
is
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apply
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48%
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people
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of people
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bought
instant
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coffee
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and 43% bought fresh
coffee
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.
Consequently
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,
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the
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percentages
diffrent
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different
in Hobalt
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are
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more remarkable.
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, we have three
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other
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cities. In Sydney and Brisbane
consume
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apply
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coffee
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and
tea
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, in order was 61% and 56%,
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, In Brisbane 54% of
people
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bought
instant
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coffee
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and merely 34%
keen
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were keen
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to buy fresh
coffee
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.
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, In Sydney 46% bought
instant
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coffee
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and 43%
prefer
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preferred
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fresh
coffee
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,
Then
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,
diversity
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the diversity
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of consume different drinks in
this
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city is more than
Brisbane
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in Brisbane
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. And
at
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apply
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last
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, we can see
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the results
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of Adelaide city that 50% of
people
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more
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apply
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enjoy
drank
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drinking
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instant
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coffee
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and close to it, 49% bought
coffee
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or
tea
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, in 4
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last
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apply
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weeks and just 34% paid money for fresh
coffees
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coffee
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, tea, coffee, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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