The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts provide information about the percentage of males and females who do homework, and the second chart shows the average
time
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males and females do housework. in an unknown country.
Overall
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, Females have a higher record in cooking and cleaning than Males.
While
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House repairs the
men
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have a higher percentage than the
women
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.
In addition
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, the average
time
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of housework. the
women
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spent a higher rate than the
men
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.
while
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other categories remain the same. Despite
this
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, Cooking and cleaning have 80 and 60 per cent in the
women
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while
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the
men
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decreased by 20 per cent in Both categories.
whereas
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the Pet care remains the same for home tasks and Average
time
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.
Furthermore
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, in House Repairs
men
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have a higher
percentagecent
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percentage
of
women
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in housework and the average
time
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to do the home tasks, with an average of approximately 19 per cent for two tasks.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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