The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts provide information about the percentage of males and females who do homework, and the second chart shows the average
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males and females do housework. in an unknown country.
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