The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented bar chart delineates the changes in the exercise habits of male and female communities in various six groups which show ages.

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, we analyse that clearly at first glance, the

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with the highest bar in

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is 45 to 54.

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, the highest bar among males is 15 to 34 . When the

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and males were 65 and over , their rates were roughly equal and the other significant point is the male

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was higher than the female

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25 to 34.

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, It is explicitly observed that the proportion of

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in 35 to 44 is nearly fifty in every hundred ( %39.5),

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, it is

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rate that made its position the lowest level among

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.

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male has the third highest rate with roughly fifty-three individuals in every hundred (%53.3) and their percentages are highly different.

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, after the 35 to 44 male

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caught an

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tendency mildly.

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, the female

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lost their remained stable position after 55 to 64 and decreased abruptly.

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in the male category maintained smoothly

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getting older

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to the decline of female tendency.