You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table gives us a calculation about 4 different products a
coffee
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shop offers on a weekday.
Overall
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, most employees love to drink
coffee
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for the whole day compared to the others.
However
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,
tea
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is categorized as the lowest drink to consume among the rest. Before 10.30, more than 265 workers preferred to eat pastries
while
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sipping
coffee
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.
In contrast
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,
tea
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and sandwiches were only consumed by 110 and 50 people respectively. Shifting to 10.30, hundreds of people remained unchanged about their necessity for caffeine, meanwhile, there was an increase in the number of employees who grabbed sandwiches
this
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time, approximately 150 people. In the afternoon hours, the consumption of pastries went back to before, reaching about 150 workers,
while
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tea
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is needed the least only for 35 workers.
At the end
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of the day, the majority of them still choose
coffee
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as the highest necessity, followed by sandwiches, pastries, and
tea
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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