The two pie charts illustrate the proportions of some professions of females and males employed in UK in 1992.
The two pie charts illustrate the percentage of six different types of occupations of both genders in the British in 1992.
Overall
, a significant part of females was
non- manual professions and male employees were, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
half
proportion manual and the other half
was
non-manual workers.
In the given year, 31% of ladies worked in clerical or related jobs and 29% preferred managerial and professional positions. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
In addition
to that, 9% chose other non-manual occupations as their career. However
, roughly one-quarter of females contributed to craft or similar categories which were roughly the same males
. Change preposition
as males
Also
, the general labour and other manual work selected 3% and 1% was the smallest.
In terms of males, just over a half
proportion had worked on manual work, it was bigger than females. The craft and similar, other manual and general labourer was accounting for 26%, 24% and 2% respectively. The other half
consisted of managerial and professional, clerical or related and other non-manual accounting for 36%, 6% and 6% respectively.Submitted by ranasinghenadeeshani07 on
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