The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table shows data about different types of families living in beggary in Australia in 1999.
The table compares
in
terms of percentage different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Change preposition
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It is clear that
in this
country the proportion is not very high but the difference depends on factors like their children
, parents, number of people, age or number of parents.
Firstly
, if we focus on the highest percentages, we have 21% which concern sole parents, the following it
is single people with no Correct pronoun usage
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children
with around 19%. After those
, there are couples with Correct determiner usage
that
children
who have a proportion of 12%.
Secondly
, there are percentages under 10%, starting with a couple without any children
then
with 7%, then
single aged person
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persons
with
6% and Change preposition
at
lastly
with the lower proportion aged
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of aged
couple
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couples
with
4%. All in all the percentage of all households is 11% represented by 1,837,000 persons.Change preposition
at
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