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The first pie chart below shows European Union member state shares of installed capacity of renewable egergy for last year. The second pie chart below shows the breakdown for Germany's sources of renewable energy, also for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first pie chart below shows European Union member state shares of installed capacity of renewable egergy for last year. The second pie chart below shows the breakdown for Germany's sources of renewable energy, also for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of electric energy production from four sources in
Ireland
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 and the table demonstrates the main reasons
of
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for
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electricity
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 consumption in the exact country.
Overall
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, coal and gas are the major sources of
electricity
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 generation and the primary reason for electric power usage is heating in
Ireland
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. The electric energy production from coal is almost half of the total
electricity
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 generation in
Ireland
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, exhibiting the main source of electric power and
this
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 is followed by gas with just over a
third,
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demonstrating the second-highest electric energy source in
Ireland
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.
This
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 proportion is a tenth for each wind and solar. In
Ireland
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, the most significant reason for
electricity
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 usage is heating with 55%. The proportion of
electricity
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 consumption for lighting and kitchen appliances
are
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is
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 a fifth and 15% respectively. Electric power usage for consumer electronics and phone battery charging account for %5 of the total outcome.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, electricity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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