The table shows the proportion of women in the labour force and women in management in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the proportion of women in the labour force  and women in management in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the percentage of
women
in the
labour
force
and
women
in
management
in five countries, which are Australia, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan, and the United States.
Overall
, it can be seen that the United States has the highest percentage of
women
in the
labour
force
as well as
the highest percentage of
women
in
management
.   In the United States, both figures for
labour
force
and
management
are just below half, which is the highest among the others. Similar to the former, Australia
also
has high numbers for both metrics, representing 42% and 43%, respectively. Sri Lanka,
on the other hand
, has a fifth of the workforce, and the number of
women
who are dedicated to
management
is 12%.   The next two countries have contrasting relations in these two variables. The first is Japan, which has a 48% workforce, but only 17% of
women
work in
management
. The second is Sri Lanka, which has a 41%
labour
force
;
however
, the proportion of
women
in
management
is much lower than that, accounting for only 9%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, labour, force, management with synonyms.
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