The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the
language
proficiencies of Use synonyms
students
in a university in 2000 and 2010.
In 2000, about 30% of Use synonyms
students
exclusively utilized Use synonyms
English
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, a comparable number of Linking Words
students
spoke only French or another Use synonyms
language
. Learning two additional languages or solely mastering German were less popular choices among university Use synonyms
students
. By 2010, Use synonyms
students
proficient exclusively in Spanish became the predominant group on campus. Use synonyms
Proficiency
in another Use synonyms
language
ranked second in prevalence, Use synonyms
while
competence solely in French or German exhibited the lowest percentages.
At the beginning of the 21st century, 30% of college attendees were bilingual in Spanish and Linking Words
English
. The combined percentage of those proficient in another Use synonyms
language
and solely in French accounted for 30%, marking it as the highest among the groups. Use synonyms
Conversely
, 20% of pupils lacked Linking Words
proficiency
in any Use synonyms
language
other than Use synonyms
English
.
A decade later, 35% of Use synonyms
students
had acquired Use synonyms
proficiency
in Spanish, marking it as the most prevalent Use synonyms
language
skill. Conversing in another Use synonyms
language
emerged as the second most prevalent trend on campus, with Use synonyms
proficiency
in discussions held in French, German, and Use synonyms
English
occupying 30% each."
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This
revised version aims to maintain clarity Linking Words
while
avoiding the repetition of words more than twice in close proximity, especially in conveying information about Linking Words
language
Use synonyms
proficiency
among university Use synonyms
students
in 2000 and 2010.Use synonyms
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