The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India.

The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two 

countries; China and India.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The charts illustrate the proportion of
food
Use synonyms
consumed in 2008 compared between the
world
Use synonyms
and two regions in Asia.
Overall
Linking Words
, it can be seen that processed
food
Use synonyms
was the most eaten in among three zones, despite the other categories
have
Wrong verb form
having
show examples
a different priority. Processed
food
Use synonyms
was the favourite both in the
world
Use synonyms
and
China
Use synonyms
, with 41% and 34%, respectively. The percentage of people on earth who consume vegetables and fruits was 29%,
while
Linking Words
in
China
Use synonyms
the number was greater at 32%.
In contrast
Linking Words
, the animal
food
Use synonyms
in the
world
Use synonyms
was bigger than
China
Use synonyms
by about 13%.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, nuts and seeds had a huge gap share, in which only 4% consumed it, whilst in
China
Use synonyms
there were 19%. In comparison with India, 39% of people consume processed
food
Use synonyms
, less than the
world
Use synonyms
. The second priority belongs to animal meals with 27%, followed by vegetables and fruits which were eaten by 23%. The
last
Linking Words
one was nuts and seeds, which had the smallest
consumer
Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
show examples
at 11%.
Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words food, world, china with synonyms.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: