2.The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in seven different types of profession across the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words.

2.The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in seven different types of profession across the UK in 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the proportion of executives by gender in seven various industries across the UK in 2007. It can be seen that construction was the most popular amongst men with the highest percentage of male executives.
While
teaching and therapists had the highest proportion of female management. In more detail, both genders had equal participation in journalism.
Moreover
, only two out of seven have the highest proportion of males, namely scientists and law at around 60% and 55% respectively.
In contrast
, the roles involving high emotional intelligence,
such
as, advertising, teaching, and therapists are dominated by females.
Whereas
males dominated in fact-based and disciplined jobs,
for example
: construction, scientists, and law.
Finally
, women had the biggest share in teaching by a staggering ratio of 90%
while
men performed the same score in construction.
To sum up
, females had the highest participation rate across the majority of industries in 2007.
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