The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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population
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percentage
in four Asian countries staying in cities between 1970 to 2020, and the Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
perdictions
for 2030 and 2040.
As you can see, Malaysia almost had the highest Correct your spelling
predictions
prediction
population
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, in 1970, the largest percentage was located in Change the verb form
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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total
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Consequently
Philippines
had Correct article usage
the Philippines
highest
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the highest
population
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orignally
(around 32%), and Correct your spelling
originally
then
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growing
significantly between 1980 to 1990, and had a small decline from 1990 to 2010. Eventually, which increasing slowly less Wrong verb form
grew
30
years, reach the rough percentage of 60.
Indonesia had the lowest Change preposition
than 30
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countries
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