The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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level
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levels
post school
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post-school
prerequisite
in Australia and the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
prerequisites
men
and women
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.
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these requirements
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this
bar chart is that men
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qualifications than Change preposition
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women
in lower degrees and in higher degrees like master
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master's
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bachelor
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the bachelor
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levels
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level,
women
have educated more than men
.
With Respect to the skilled vocation diploma men
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than
women
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women's
15%.
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15% On
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diploma
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diplomas
men
at 75% and 35% respectively.in bachelor
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bachelor's
degree
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degree,
women
's proportion is slightly more than men
by 50 % and 45 % in turn.
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women
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men
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master's
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degrees
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degree,
men
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competencies
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women
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