The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graphs illustrate the ratio of workers by sector in the UK from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that public was the dominant area with the highest percentage,
while
private and self-employed had similar levels. Public companies started with around 38 in 2000. It remained steady until 2002 and three years later continuously increased between 40 to 50. Unfortunately, in 2006 the number of employees had declined by about 45.
Then
, the trends climbed to above 50 from 2007 to 2010.
In contrast
, the private was leading at almost 50%
initially
. It reached the same level with the public in 2003,
then
it has plunged to 20% until 2010.
Furthermore
, people who owned businesses grew considerably between under 20 and around 28 in 2007 and 2008, which is similar
with
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the private's point. Two years later it increased to 30
at the end
of the period.
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