The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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apply

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given diagram illustrates how the system of Australia

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supplying

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now and in the future. At a glance, there are three categories of

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which are pure

water

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storm

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stormwater

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water

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and

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waste

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wastewater

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water

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. The pure

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is supplied to households, factories, shops and

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the city

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city

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while

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the

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storm

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stormwater

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water

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produced by them is thrown

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river

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the river

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with, the

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supply system in Australia uses

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dams

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/storage to save pure

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and

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waste

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wastewater

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water

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, the pure

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from

dam

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the dam

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/storage is distributed to some places

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as households, factories, shops and

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the city

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the

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waste

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wastewater

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water

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from

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the dam

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/storage goes to

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water

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the water

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treatment plant.

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, the households, the factories, the shops and the city

result

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some

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storm

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stormwater

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water

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that is

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directly sent to

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water

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the water

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treatment

plant

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plants

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and they

also

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produce

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storm

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stormwater

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water

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that is

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distributed to

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the river

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river

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rivers

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. In the future, Australia will use the same

water

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supply management to distribute the pure

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storm

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stormwater

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water

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and

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waste

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wastewater

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water

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, storm, waste with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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