The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
given diagram illustrates how the system of Australia Verb problem
apply
in
supplying Correct your spelling
is
water
now and in the future.
At a glance, there are three categories of water
which are pure water
, storm
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stormwater
water
and waste
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wastewater
water
. The pure water
is supplied to households, factories, shops and Correct article usage
the city
city
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cities
while
the storm
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stormwater
water
produced by them is thrown to
Change preposition
into
river
.
Correct article usage
the river
To begin
with, the water
supply system in Australia uses dam
/storage to save pure Fix the agreement mistake
dams
water
and waste
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wastewater
water
. Then
, the pure water
from dam
/storage is distributed to some places Correct article usage
the dam
such
as households, factories, shops and city
. Correct article usage
the city
While
the waste
Correct your spelling
wastewater
water
from dam
/storage goes to Correct article usage
the dam
water
treatment plant. Add an article
the water
a water
Furthermore
, the households, the factories, the shops and the city result
some Add the preposition
result in
result from
storm
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stormwater
water
that is
directly sent to water
treatment Correct article usage
the water
plant
and they Fix the agreement mistake
plants
also
produce storm
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stormwater
water
that is
distributed to Add an article
the river
river
.
In the future, Australia will use the same Fix the agreement mistake
rivers
water
supply management to distribute the pure water
, storm
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stormwater
water
and waste
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wastewater
water
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