The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the driving test passed rates of females and males in one of the Asian regions from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that women
were dominant
percentage and had a higher score than men throughout the period.
Correct article usage
the dominant
Initially
, the number of women
who passed their driving by around 48% in 1980 and increased slightly to 52% in 1990. Then
, the percentage of women
peaked at almost 70% in the first 20th century. However
, it dropped to about 63% at the end
of the season.
In contrast
, men had a lower rate than women
from the beginning year. In 1980, it just started by under 30%. Furthermore
, males had
rose significantly between around 37% and 49% from 1990 to 2000. It remained steady at the same level as Unnecessary verb
apply
last
period. In comparison, the rates of males were under 50% in all periods, while
female's
approximately in above 50%.Change the noun form
females
female
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