The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
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number
of Use synonyms
people
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payed
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paid
sport
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sports
year
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the year
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voluneers
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volunteers
number
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people
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number
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number
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to
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on
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in
other
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the other
section
with just under 60. As Use synonyms
it
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volunteer
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volunteers
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enrolled
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people
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more
.
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the
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coaching
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coaching,
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