You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice
Dear Ali,
I hope you are doing well. I just heard that you are not comfortable with your old school. I know what you feel. Adapting to some
situasion
is a difficult Correct your spelling
situation
situations
things
for some people to do. I writing Change the noun form
thing
this
letter to help you adjust to your new school.
To begin
with, you should to
have Change the verb form
apply
initiaing
conversations with your classmates. These are Correct your spelling
initiating
is
simple ways you can get started and get Unnecessary verb
apply
use
to adapting to a new Change the form of the verb
used
enironment
. Correct your spelling
environment
Furthermore
, you can finding
common Change the verb form
find
be finding
interest
with Fix the agreement mistake
interests
you
friends. That way you will find Correct pronoun usage
your
friend
who are compatible with you.
Fix the agreement mistake
friends
In addition
, you can joining
clubs that align with your Change the verb form
join
be joining
interest
. That way you will Fix the agreement mistake
interests
find
Verb problem
make
a
new friends in a different class Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
sucs
as basketball or badminton. In general, my advice is to not let negative thoughts lead you to negativity. You shouldn't be alone because the world is too big if you don't have friends.
Give me some information about how is everything going.
Best wishes,Correct your spelling
such
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea that relates to the overall purpose of the letter. Avoid mixing different suggestions in one paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate greetings and closings for a friendly letter. The closing sentence could be enhanced to warm up the tone a bit more.
coherence cohesion
Work on your logical structure by presenting your ideas systematically. The advice should follow a logical sequence and be easy to follow.
task achievement
Your task achievement could improve. Make sure to fully expand on each point you suggest. For example, elaborate on initiating conversations and how this can lead to making friends.
task achievement
The writing tone should be consistent and appropriate for the task. Consider using a more supportive and friendly approach throughout.