Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays,

people

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prefer driving their own

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in order to have

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and more comfortable journey .

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, we come across the increasing number of

cars

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which can lead to some challenging

problems

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such

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as

pollution

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and

traffic

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especially

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in large cities.

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some believe that the best solution for the

traffic

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and

pollution

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problems

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is to increase the

petrol

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price, I think there would be better solutions to reduce these

problems

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. There are some reasons which indicate that increasing the costs of

petrol

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cannot be an appropriate way to solve the problem of

traffic

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and

pollution

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. The first reason is that only a few number of

people

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will reduce using their own personal

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as the

petrol

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price increases. In fact, many

people

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can afford to pay for the

petrol

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and for these

people

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the ease with which they travel is important. The second reason is that public transportation which is the main alternative to personal

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is not adequate for the whole society.

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have to wait a lot to take the bus or underground.

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, they must stand all the journey since the buses are too crowded.

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, there would be some effective solutions to deal with the problem of

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and

pollution

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. The first solution is to promote the

quality

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of the used

petrol

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. When the government provides

petrol

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with low

quality

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, it can cause more

pollution

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. The lower

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quality

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petrol

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of petrol

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used by

cars

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, the more

pollution

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will

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be . The next solution is to provide

people

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more and better public

transport

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system . In

this

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way, most

people

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prefer using public

transport

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since it is cheaper, easier and more comfortable.

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, if citizens have easy access to buses and different types of public

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system

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, they probably will not drive their own

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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

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the

petrol

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cost cannot

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to be the best way to solve the

pollution

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and

traffic

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problems

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. Since many

people

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have the budget to pay for it and they prefer to have a comfortable journey.

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, we should devise other solutions

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as using

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quality

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petrol

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and increasing the capacity of

public

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the public

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transport

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system in order to make it available for most

people

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.