The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line chart exhibits the employment patterns in percentage

according to

related fields in the USA between 1930 and 2010. From an

overall

perspective, all classified careers

growed

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grew

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up except farming, fishing and foresting as a category and other services which did not indicate significant changes during the period. To look more details, farming, fishing and foresting dropped from 75 to

near

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nearly

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2 per cent between these years.

Number

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A number

The number

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of industrial employers was steady for a

therty-year

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thirty-year

period about 2 per cent from 1930 and

then

suddenly and

countiniously

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continuously

soared for 40 years until 2000 and reached

to

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apply

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30 per cent. After 2000, there was a stabilized line in statistics

relaed

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related

to industrial human forces. One thing to point out is,

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the informaion

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informaion

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information

that the

diagrrams

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diagrams

belong office

works

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work

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, and technical and sales indicate

same

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the same

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pattern during the time,

however

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however,

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there was a crossing out between

two

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the two

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graph

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graphs

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for a ten-year course between 1970 and 1980.